Poem Draft: Downtown Oakland Lullaby

14th & Broadway Lullaby, Oakland
After Anne Waldman’s “& Sleep, the Lazy Owl of Night”

& sleep, the Cleavage Lady of Night

& sleep will make you whole

& sleep, the B-Boys of the Corner

& sleep will make you bold

& sleep, the Poets in the Skids

& sleep will make you still

& sleep, my City, sleep deep

& sleep will give reprieve

                    (repeat)

3 Responses to “Poem Draft: Downtown Oakland Lullaby”


  1. 1 Collin Kelley 29 June 2008 at 11:55 pm

    LOVE this. Love it. Great use of slant rhyme, too, esp. on deep and repeat.

  2. 2 Barbara Jane Reyes 30 June 2008 at 5:31 pm

    Collin, thanks so much for commenting on all my poems. I was just saying the other day that I don’t think other po-bloggers are interested in our blogs unless we are blogging about them and creating/fomenting drama in the process. Anyway, glad you caught the slant rhyme. I didn’t even think of “repeat” as part of it.

  3. 3 Brian 5 July 2008 at 2:39 pm

    This is just simple and beautiful.


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